Massassi Forums Logo

This is the static archive of the Massassi Forums. The forums are closed indefinitely. Thanks for all the memories!

You can also download Super Old Archived Message Boards from when Massassi first started.

"View" counts are as of the day the forums were archived, and will no longer increase.

ForumsShowcase → My personal work dump NSFW or h-scroll
My personal work dump NSFW or h-scroll
2005-10-09, 1:43 AM #1
Paintings, drawings, writings. I'll post em here.
Also sketches, and other useless stuff.
[http://geocities.com/dweedsk8er/stuff/manickle.txt]
portrait of my friend Shy

Attachments left to right:
two semi-nude photoshop paintings done from stock photos
Attachment: 7692/nudepainting.jpg (99,905 bytes)
Attachment: 7693/thingsmall.jpg (39,194 bytes)
</sarcasm>
<Anovis> mmmm I wanna lick your wet, Mentis.
__________
2005-10-09, 1:46 AM #2
small negative flower sketch, scans not as good as original though
The first sketch I did with my wacom
Attachment: 7696/negative-flowersmall.jpg (65,611 bytes)
Attachment: 7697/sketch.jpg (14,480 bytes)
</sarcasm>
<Anovis> mmmm I wanna lick your wet, Mentis.
__________
2005-10-09, 1:54 AM #3
Portrait of Taylor (TrickyKat) done in painter 8. Detailed in photoshop.
Next shot is a shot of my workspace
Attachment: 7698/taylor-painted.jpg (90,403 bytes)
Attachment: 7699/suckit.jpg (80,365 bytes)
</sarcasm>
<Anovis> mmmm I wanna lick your wet, Mentis.
__________
2005-10-09, 1:58 AM #4
Link to an animated background image I made. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14446185/
here's a small thumb of it
Attachment: 7700/snowdazesmallthumb.jpg (3,297 bytes)
</sarcasm>
<Anovis> mmmm I wanna lick your wet, Mentis.
__________
2005-10-09, 2:01 AM #5
Graffiti piece strongly influenced. I take no honest credit, I just wanted to try and mimic the style since I'm just getting into graph. But might as well post since it's my dump
Attachment: 7701/aerosmall.jpg (87,673 bytes)
</sarcasm>
<Anovis> mmmm I wanna lick your wet, Mentis.
__________
2005-10-09, 2:13 AM #6
Italian sonnet, long distance relationship gone bad:
Forget Me Nots
The rose speaks softly, in a whisper
guarded by the wind, and you
lusting love, but lost it in leu
of words gone, against the whimper
of the forget-me-nots and ginger
with a delicate kiss, we drew
what living was left, then to-be-continued
I sip from the perennial's cup, while you linger
while autumnal leaves, orange and red
fall numbingly, listlessly
we lay in quiet reverence
upon the soft-needles that make up this bed
and we awake, just in time to see
our cruel fate, and severance
---
This one seems to be titled "****"
tonite
it's like every other night
every tonight
but i pray anyways
bent over in front of my mirror
because i like the way i listen to myself
it helps me to believe
that someone is listening, here
beside me
besides you

i jot down lines about life and its worth
giving birth to the idea that maybe
death is something i won't be able to swallow
so i wallow and bathe in it
till i'm up to my waist in it
washing over me
my heart quicken it's pace
the anenomes stining my face
my blood is beginning to race

the ocean knows how but not why
just like you and i
it clings
it won't let go
till it smothers us both
and, well...
you know just how i feel
and all about the things
you know i won't tell
like how i felt like
dancing to our discord
our waves, out of sync
cancelling out "us"
but i'll be honest
i'm tired of metaphors
like when i said "I want to paint the sky a picture of you"
it wasn't because i love you
or because i think you look good in the light
it's because it's catchy
and you can picture me, painting a picture of you
or something
for the sky, that is

still
i've spent days
on my knees, in front
of that same mirror, practicing
what i would say
when it could be said
hours of time better spent
sleeping, drinking, being
living life in
fast-forward
waiting for the end
so i can watch the re-run
the caffiene and nicotine breaks
to get me through the scary parts
and while i sift through what's left
i realize i'm alone
because you changed the channel
a long time ago
and you're gone by the time
i've finished the credits

so once again, i'm left alone
to pick up the pieces
a D-I-Y guru, it seems
with the task of reassembling
whatever isn't broken
whatever didn't get lost
under my fridge

i laugh at it, sometimes
my life, with the missing bits
because you always said it's
best to laugh when you have
nothing else to do

-------

One of my earliest poems. Freeform. Called "Love Poem"
I touched on some themes in this early piece that has influenced my writing since. Some good, some bad. Can't help but be cliche sometime :)

I know a man;

When he was young, he'd spend countless
hours playing on his bed while green serpents
circled his ship. "Walk the plank, scoundrel!"
"Say Goodbye"

He used to kiss his mom goodnight
let her tuck him into his bed
So no monsters could snatch him
in the night

He'd sit perfectly still for hours
while his grandpa told stories about
The frontier days and the natives
during his childhood

He could be alone for hours with
himself, and his books
love stories, dramas, and everything else
that makes life exciting

He imagined that one day
He would meet his love
and after his confession
He would be freed from sin

In a perfect world

now, serpents tempt him with
forbidden fruit
Vultures orbit low, overhead
while he awaits his journey towards the light or dark

before bed, he kisses noone
Alone at night
The only time he's safe from everything
safe from himself

Coffee and nicotine corrode his veins
Endless, meaningless meetings about
Payrolls and Insurance forms. He could use another deduction,
Maybe a kid...?

He still reads
"Home Computers for Dummies"
the manual to his geo metro
Thoughts of floppy-drive-shafts haunt his dreams

And his dream girl?
Nothing special
Child-bearing hips
Maybe he could work on that deduction...

and life continues on
Drab, boring
A grayscale wardrobe
Same cheap coffee in the mornings

He's never ridden among wild horses
He's never jumped out of an airplane

He can spend an hour waiting for his invoice to print
But he can't wait the 4 rings it takes for you to pick up your phone

Adrenaline, mixing with caffiene and nicotine
For once in his life, he's scared. But he's happy

He can wait for an eternity to tell you that
he will love you forever
Because he will, and he does

But, drawing all that we can
from the travesty of his life
to him, this is the worst thing of all

Because even though he'll
be there for you, forever
forever can only last a lifetime

--

Another early one, "Moonlit"
This bed of soft, dewy grass has swallowed my pain
replacing it with the stars above me
Because I am one of them
I belong with them,
as you do not belong
With the soft light, careening from its source
beautiful, stunning
Like a hundred pieces of the broken mirror on the ground
Surreal, until you've gotten a closer look
shattered bits of your life all strewn about
the reflective gaze of one with a crown of thorns
but the pillows are soft and broken in
just like my heart
they sink into a dream
one of an exhillerating ride among the cloudless moonlight
like a magical romance that can never be
until I wake
not even the purest feeling could manifest this dream
dreams of figures dancing, filled with joy
but I do not know,
nor have,
the lovely melody,
as I can hardly see their eternal happiness
across the horizon, it floats out of reach
I have lost nothing, though
but my heart races to inaudible song
slowly falling out of tune
for I have ventured nothing
slowly becoming numb
the chaos of reality sets in
and I'm alone
beneath the moonlit sky
among the whispering trees
telling lovers secrets
in a bed of soft, dewy grass
And the stars above me seem empty
without me, I belong with them
as you do not belong
</sarcasm>
<Anovis> mmmm I wanna lick your wet, Mentis.
__________
2005-10-09, 2:15 AM #7
"Teen Angst" a fun one:) I know the idea has been done before, but didn't at the time. still early work
OH! Woe is me.
Writing poetry about my love life
or lack thereof
My neighbor, he's a tool
and he smells like dog drool

I Shall Weep

Pressing the
ret
ur
n key randomly
Suspense
Anger
Sorrow
Redundant


I'll write a haiku
About how I suck at life
Please save me from death

Poetry as a cry for help
or a cry for people, like you
F L A M E W A R
now, intense emotions flair
NOW I will make a cry for help

"sucks to be you so bad.
I pity you because I'm without any self-worth
and dignity of my own!"

OH SIGH
MOAN
*sigh*
My life is bad, and so is my hair
one last line


I am lonely
P i T y
</sarcasm>
<Anovis> mmmm I wanna lick your wet, Mentis.
__________
2005-10-09, 2:16 AM #8
"What's next?"

Fairly recent, even made a thread about it before.

It's almost as if the smile on my face
goes unnoticed, because maybe
my heart is too tired to put itself into it
worn thin from being battered and beat
if I wear my heart on my sleeve, then
everyone may as well walk all over me
so I hold on to what I can
and that's you, it's always been true
you're the light-house in my stormy mind
casting light on every bit of my soul
where thoughts flow like icebergs
and just when you thought
you've gotten to the bottom of things
you realize you've accomplished nothing
but there's not much left to see
I'm sinking, receding, caught between
what little is left of myself
and my sanity
but what if I'm right, and the answer has always been
right in front of me
my heart, my faith, my trust
but life isn't fair and faith isn't just
just like you'd like to think;
maybe he doesn't care
maybe it's only lust
you may be right, maybe
but there's no time in life for
what may be
there's hardly enough time
for what one can see
and still, all I can see is you
my guiding light, my beacon out at sea
but if you're the sandbar beneath me
then it's your weeds tangled around my feet
it's your life, your hope for light
why you hold your breath,
and it's the reason I haven't left
some may see life as sink or swim
some sort of contest that you had better win
So they take what they can get
And while they may die happy
I haven't even crossed the finish line yet
Why hurry through life
only to waste the best parts of it
on regret?
That's why I keep telling you to
just try your best
to stay afloat
I'll be our life-vest
I'll be our little boat
no matter how long it takes
we'll make it to shore
then we can rest our eyes
and rest our minds
in the calm after the storm
</sarcasm>
<Anovis> mmmm I wanna lick your wet, Mentis.
__________
2005-10-09, 2:16 AM #9
My latest work in progress, chock full of cliches. I'm so emo hehehe

bear in mind, not finished or edited. MY DUMP MAN

a practice in repetition
like us

I wish I could tell you that I'm ok
that I could wrap up all my heart-ache and send it away
The truth is...
from your lips, I long to hear decay
as you admit to loving me, completely
then from out of your heart, it all pours

and it will shatter my heart if I'm too scared to take yours

I am stuck with glass thorns
stemming from transparent riddles
as I'm forced to watch you tear in two
when our love fizzles
and you struggle to make the fire restart
it will make you fall apart
and it's only just the start
I long to understand 'what exactly is his appeal'
and I wish I could make you feel how I feel
but I know a secret you're scared to reveal
our love --
its not forgotten or lost
no matter how much I am trodden or tossed
no matter how much you fear my heart has glossed
because when I look in your eyes
when I catch wind of your heart
beating like butterflys
when I look across the room to find you smiling
so do I
but the problem has nothing to do with nevers
it's because we measured our love in forevers
and forevers are measured in lifetimes
but for the first time in my life
I realize that lifetimes are measured by love
it's like a puzzle to solve, or a sign from above...
So maybe ...
we are a rubiks cube to twist and turn
a hedge-maze that needs either a trim or a burn
if we're a jig-zaw puzzle, are we missing a few pieces?
or if we're lock & key, then together is completeness...
we spent nights and days solving the other
but by the time we'd returned, our locks had rusted stuck
our keys dont fit, hinges jammed, and rotors ****ed
maybe that's the point
we can't go on living day by day
if we're too focused on forevers and love
so now I watch and wait for the day where we say
either give up or get out
love isn't lost but right now it's about
living a life, with change and persistence
living a life that makes it worth our existence
a life where we can look up at the stars
and a life where we can look back at the scars



So as days come and go, so will I
so will you...
be moved to make second-guesses [?]
dig out the best of your dresses [?]
pray to god that it still impresses [?]
hope that life indeed regresses [?]
because I do
</sarcasm>
<Anovis> mmmm I wanna lick your wet, Mentis.
__________
2005-10-09, 2:25 AM #10
I remember TrickyKat...still good stuff.
"Häb Pfrässe, süsch chlepfts!" - The coolest language in the world (besides Cherokee)
2005-10-09, 2:33 AM #11
a quick two minute sketch of a friend from memory
practice in getting guides down, I tend to get too detaild too early and get lost
Attachment: 7702/3 minute emma.JPG (28,282 bytes)
</sarcasm>
<Anovis> mmmm I wanna lick your wet, Mentis.
__________
2005-10-09, 12:30 PM #12
Nice work.. I love drawing female bodies and faces..
"Nulla tenaci invia est via"
2005-10-09, 5:54 PM #13
Amazing stuff. Really great dude.
D E A T H
2005-10-09, 9:58 PM #14
HOLY SMAT!
2005-10-10, 5:08 AM #15
Nice.
Star Wars: TODOA | DXN - Deus Ex: Nihilum

↑ Up to the top!