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Nebby and Star
2006-01-01, 1:56 AM #1
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Updated again!
[Second Revision]
Added a blue light flare thing coming from the star. I also toned down (faded) the light rays which are to the upper left of the star, they now match the others better. I can't really think of how else I could improve this piece before I finalize it. If you have anything to say about it, now's the time to say it!
[http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/371/nebulamattesmall2yi.jpg]


[First Revision]
I added several layers to the nebula to expand the color variation as well as a cloudy texture layer. I refined the light rays, they are now less blurry. I realigned one ray so it aligned better with the position of the sun. This started as a skybox panel for Space Noxx II. It still is, but I really like how it has evolved into a separate piece. Comments still welcome, as always.
[http://img324.imageshack.us/img324/5475/nebulamattesmall5xe.jpg]

[Original]
Original
Click for full size. When I decide it's finished, I'll expand it to a 4:3 ratio for desktop use and 8:3 for dual-display configurations. The stars tile so no problem there.

Comments?
Bassoon, n. A brazen instrument into which a fool blows out his brains.
2006-01-01, 2:00 AM #2
It's very pretty, but too blurry for my taste.
2006-01-01, 9:17 AM #3
I wouldn't mind a bit more texture in the nebula itself, and perhaps some more color variation.

Also, though this is obviously a case of personal taste, I think it'd look quite a bit better if the stars weren't as dense as they are.
2006-01-01, 2:00 PM #4
Thanks for the suggestions, I'll see what I can do. I'll try to clear up the bluriness and add a detail layer to the nebula. What I've been wanting to do is to get a more cloudy look, but it's difficult. And yeah, the stars are a little dense. You should have seen them before! They were worse.
Bassoon, n. A brazen instrument into which a fool blows out his brains.
2006-01-01, 2:55 PM #5
Yeah, I'd like to see more vibrant, rich color. It looks very pale at the moment.
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2006-01-01, 5:37 PM #6
It's beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I wish I could make things like that. I suppose I'll just stick to levels.
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2006-01-01, 5:49 PM #7
Thanks! It's actually not as hard as it looks. You should have seen the original version, it was pale as a white guy's ***. The trick to good celestial art is to keep building upon it over and over. Sometimes you can never stop. If anyone is interested, I highly recommend the tutorials at Greg Martin's website.
Bassoon, n. A brazen instrument into which a fool blows out his brains.
2006-01-01, 5:53 PM #8
Man, that's a huge improvement!
2006-01-01, 6:28 PM #9
Much much much much better.
2006-01-02, 12:26 AM #10
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