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Everywhere but a tutorial site...

2006-04-04, 7:53 PM #1

Grismath

Registered User

Posts: 5,177

*burnsauce*

Check out my flash animation I made for business school.

This is supposed to convey the family-oriented nature of American Airlines in a commercial spoof format.

I'm already aware of a lot of things I need to fix, but all criticism and comments are welcome.

Cordially,
Lord Tiberius Grismath
1473 for '1337' posts.

2006-04-04, 7:55 PM #2

Zell

Not the senator.r

Posts: 7,190

Hmm, I like how it shows airplanes crashing into each other in an 'ad' for that same airline. :p

DO NOT WANT.

2006-04-04, 9:40 PM #3

Tracer

El Duderino.

Posts: 6,321

It's kind of low-quality, but the midair collision made me laugh.

But I guess you can't hire real actors and stuff.

COUCHMAN IS BACK BABY

2006-04-05, 7:59 AM #4

Grismath

Registered User

Posts: 5,177

The commercial is going to be a 30 second spot in a live-action film that I have been directing with members of my management team.

Cordially,
Lord Tiberius Grismath
1473 for '1337' posts.

2006-04-05, 7:48 PM #5

Zloc_Vergo

Zulenglashernbracker

Posts: 5,888

The text at the end is displayed for too short a time, and while I like how it moves fast, maybe have the people look around and make "gasp" faces and such.

I like it though.

I had a blog. It sucked.

2006-04-05, 9:32 PM #6

Sparrowhawk

Registered User

Posts: 231

Genius.

I like the addition of the legoland city. Classic.