Yes, this is rap, and no, I'm not talking about killing *****es or ****ing hoes.

Any feed would be awesome! Eventually I hope to write 2 more and a hook to finish this.

A lot of you know, what its like to be at that spot in your flow;
Your thoughts in control, everything taught you just let it go;
So you stop and you listen, crop it and trim it its got to be finished;
thoughts are spinning so don't zone out or it'll be lost in a minute;
Your the boss of ya business don't ever get caught stopped or diminished;
if you rock then you win it if not then you improve to do some damage;
Whatever the plan is no one man can manage its hard to understand it;
We need crews with views beside our own 'cause it ain't all inside our dome;
You can't win with hype alone you need the skills to fight-and-own;
So leave the pride at home your not trying to write a throne;
We all make mistakes but its the corrections that take their place;
For the record I used stare and rate my own **** as fair and great;
But for whoever was there to say 'it ain't good' I say thanks...

Could you possibly rap it for us so we could hear what it's like when it's being sung/rapped?

I don't have any equipment to do so. I had a crappy PC mic, but that broke when I accidentally formatted my media partition a few months ago.