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Good idea, Bad follow-through
2006-05-31, 8:11 AM #1
Meaning, I might expand on this in a year or so. But, for all you sci-fi geeks, some writing:


We had conquered everything. Our population spread across the universes- even with an infinite lifespan, one could never see all the planets we inhabited. We were all-powerful, and nothing God could put against us could prevent our advance.

And God did not have to stop us; we stopped ourselves. Our own petty debates and differences over species and chemical structure stopped us. The War stopped us. We tore holes in space itself; we killed our own in numbers beyond comprehension.

In the confusion, many of us reverted back to barbaric ways- isolated themselves in corners, in spaces as small as mere planets. Eventually, these planets forgot of the rest of the universe, but for legends and ruins. They rediscovered the old ways, the ancient practices we had used before we ruled the universes.

And then one of them rediscovered science. Forty thousand years after the War, a small planet covered in dihydrogen monoxide sent two of its inhabitants to its single, grey moon.
And then they sent some to another nearby planet. And another.

And eventually, Earth rediscovered us.


Is 40k years a good measure of time?
2006-05-31, 8:22 AM #2
they sent three to the moon. one of them stayed behind in the lander. ;)

*shrug* i'd read it.
My girlfriend paid a lot of money for that tv; I want to watch ALL OF IT. - JM
2006-05-31, 8:41 AM #3
Only two of them landed. Those were the two I was referring to. I know they sent a third, too, to orbit, but I meant the two to the surface.
And the lander had the two. The third stayed in orbit.

But thanks.
2006-05-31, 10:28 AM #4
After the War, only one ship remained, looking for its ancient home beyond the stars. It was called... Battlestar Galactica. :rolleyes:

Whose perspective will this follow? The space civilization's first contact with Earthlings in eons, or vice versa? Also, what kinds of themes/ideas are you hoping to explore here?
Cordially,
Lord Tiberius Grismath
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2006-05-31, 10:58 AM #5
Eh....yea. :rolleyes: That thought had occurred to me.

I'm really not sure where I'm going with this...It's basically humans (as we know them) move away from Earth and begin largescale habitation of other planets, but there's already sentient life on them. The war's over by then, but (our) humanity still has trouble adjusting.

And no, I have no idea what I'm doing.

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