I hope I spelled that right lol

Well, the body and especially the feet aren't close to finished but I'm looking more of how the head is and how proportions seems to peeps. Whatcha think?

The pixilation is just to make sure Massassi won't get into a fit w/ me because he technically is nude......

FYI he has no neck.

he looks like he is made of putty.

But does the face and proportions look okay?

Humonculus, I believe.

And he has no toes... poor soul.

No.

I think the shoulders are too wide and the feet too small.

Hands are fine, but fingers need to be different lengths. Look at your fingers, then look at his.

The ankles need to have more of a curve, and the feet need to be longer. A proportionate human is approximately 7.5 hands tall. Use that to judge the height.

His shoulders are far too broad and his neck too thick. I think you should give him a flatter chest for now, also.

Always remember the golden ratio, also (or just base the model off the Vitruvian Man).

the shoulders seem to be too far forward as well

He seems to lack a waist too.

I think the eyes are too far apart too. If not, narrow the bridge of the nose.

The head is too small for those shoulders. Or the shoulders are too wide in general.

http://www.cdmedia-studio.com/port8.htm

[Edit]Just out of curiosity, what program are you using. Also, what method are yoou using to construct your model? Face loop splitting? NURBS patches?

You know what that reminds me of.. that guy you could like stretch across the room.. stretch armstrong maybe?

Are the proportions really that hard?

*bites tounge*

I was doing this just on gestamation since I couldn't find any good reference pictures, and my big focus at first was getting a decent looking face.

I changed the finger lengths. I'm doing another detail pass on the chest and waist (now that I have good reference pics thank you Ric_Olie) since this is destined to be animated and filmed....

My method of creation was low-poly 3do and then applying a mesh smooth. Is this foolish and should I start from scratch in a different manner, cause this is how I was taught to do organics.

I'll get some new screenies after changing the body around.

Starting with a block/low poly object is a great way to go. Use face loop splits to get gradually more detail and move your verts as you please. Mesh smooth should really only be applied to the final mesh.

This is kind of what I'm talking about: http://maxrovat.sns.hu/subdiv/subdivmodeling.htm

Of course, that isn't the only way. It's a way I've found to be a good balance between time spent and getting the detail I need. Experiment.

[Edit]After seeing this and giving out advice, I almost want to start modeling again.

I see boob!

[QUOTE=Pedro T Hutt]Humonculus, I believe.[/QUOTE]Homunculus, actually.

Hence why I said "I believe", haven't read Fullmetal Alchemist in a while. >.>;;

Sounds like you could skip all that and just use ZBrush.

It can't be a Humuncwhatever from FMA; those things look like people.

Not everybody can afford ZBrush.

I think the face is not too bad, apart from the facts that the jaw/chin area is too wide and that the face lacks cheekbones.