and it is good. Uberslug got me to try some posing today, and I must say it was enjoyable, and not really THAT hard to do.

Yeah, large image, done in MS-Paint, but I want feedback. You can comment on the humor if you feel so inclined, but I've realized I suck at making comic jokes (I'll finish my current one tomorrow, get it up, and you'll see how bad I am at jokes). I really want feedback on my positioning/posing, and anyone who has tried it, give me tips and feedback.

Oh, and this was my first real try at posing, that I stuck with it longer than 2 minutes before I said "**** this, what am I doing it for anyway?" The one I'm working on showcases a bit more posing, so I'll demonstrate my "Abilities" better tomorrow.

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Not funny. Last panel doesn't make sense. It seems like the comic is leading in a different direction, and there's no punchline to the dialogue... I suppose the visual humor in the last panel was supposed to fill that niche, but it doesn't go with the first 3 panels...

I'd reccomend removing the text 'Carl was having a terrible day." It's cheesy, and while I can see the tone you were trying to set with it, it doesn't work very well :/.

That said, I think the posing is pretty good, keep it up :). Just work on your formatting a bit, and make sure your humor makes sense to others. It's easy to get set on a joke that makes sense to you because you were involved with the process of creating it, and then realize once you release it that no one else really gets it.

Yeah, that's exactly why I said I'd prefer to keep comments centered on the posing. I realize I suck at humor, I don't need you guys to remind me of that

Oh, and I'll download GIMP sometime and do some better panelling/make text bubbles. MS Paint is very limiting, even when someone like me, who barely messes with image manipulation, tries to use it.

I may try and make a story from the next one though, albeit a sucky one.

And another reason why that one sucked so bad? I used the same poses for both of them in all 4 frames. Didn't move them one bit. I've got multiple stances for this guy (moves through a building) in the next one.

Ultimately, I'd kind of like to get something along the quality/humor lines of [url]www.hlcomic.com[/url] but that's a LONG ways off, and I'm not that funny.

Alright, I made the second one. I was going to have a final panel where the "Twinkies" blew up, or the guy got shot, or something. But I couldn't get Barney to pose in a kneeling position AND hold a rifle very well. So..sorry about it kind of ending stupidly.

And yeah, I know some of the pictures are bad quality, I could have zoomed in on the g-man a LOT more than I did, but whatever. I did multiple poses this time!

Oh, and I know, don't refer to things or post acronyms when not everyone knows what they mean. But these are in a gaming community, not going ultra-public, so I thought it was OK.

And it requires that you've played Hostage Rescue in Counter Strike atleast once and rescued a hostage to understand one of the jokes.

Le comic.

The positioning is definately better than a lot I've seen around. Espescially mine.

Now I feel really special, Glyde.

I just COUDLN'T get Barney in a good kneeling position.

the layout of the images is crap

I know, I'll fix that sometime (hopefully)

Gmod is really advanced now and you can position them really realistic. They are good for a first try I guess, but overall nothing great.

OK, mind elaborating on how I can make them better, SAJN?

Arrgh, Male07. He's used wayy too much.

I know, I know..

But it's just...HL Comic...and...and...

Ok... even MSPaint can do half-decent text bubbles...