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Hobbit Holes Episode One: Special Edition.
2006-08-24, 11:23 PM #1
HH: EO: SE

Episode Two isn't going to be finished for atleast a month, so I made a special edition of episode one to hold people over. The SE includes:

* A Custom Cursor
* Behind The Scenes
* Outtakes
* An Easter Egg
* All of Episode One
* Subtitles
Think while it's still legal.
2006-08-25, 10:57 AM #2
I know this was meant simply to be a hold over until you could finish Episode 2, but the Outtakes would have been a lot better if you could have had the original animation that they were supposed to go with. Otherwise, yay?
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2006-08-25, 11:01 AM #3
I liked it.
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2006-08-25, 9:45 PM #4
Daily 3rd place? OMFG. Awesome.
Think while it's still legal.
2006-08-27, 12:12 PM #5
Good stuff! I canna wait for Ep2!

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2006-08-27, 7:06 PM #6
[QUOTE=Victor Van Dort]Daily 3rd place? OMFG. Awesome.[/QUOTE]
That just means that they're starved for content. Not that yours was that good.

Nah, just kidding. I wasn't impressed by the special features, myself. And why no subtitles in the ORIGINAL then?
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2006-08-28, 8:25 AM #7
Not funny at all.
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2006-08-28, 11:24 AM #8
For some reason I expected that response from you. I guess I should expect that from you.
Think while it's still legal.
2006-08-28, 11:40 AM #9
The intro needs better blocking and timing.

the Looking around when he opens the door takes too long. The "dramatic chords" are overused and the subtitles turn to "aw f it" too soon.


I did enjoy the wraith / sauron scene. But I think theres was uneeded cursing in there.


And the timing for smeagols last line needs a little work i think.

"Nothing can distract us *pause* Oo! a shiney penny!"

That pause should be at least 2 seconds long.
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2006-08-28, 12:03 PM #10
[QUOTE=Victor Van Dort]For some reason I expected that response from you. I guess I should expect that from you.[/QUOTE]
I'm just stating my opinion. It's not funny. There is nothing funny about it. You aren't any good at writing comedic animations.

I'd offer something constructive, except I can't think of anything other than "scrap it and start with an idea that doesn't suck."
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2006-08-28, 6:37 PM #11
It's funny, because other people like what I write. Not just a few, but a lot. I have two animations on newgrounds that were added to collections and they have over 25k views. So I must be doing something right. Just because you have no sense of humor doesn't mean I'm not funny.
Think while it's still legal.
2006-08-30, 1:36 PM #12
It ended very suddenly, but the MGS joke made me laugh out loud, and so did the eye puns. Good job.
2006-08-30, 2:06 PM #13
I liked the reference to Terrence and Phillip there. Nice. :)
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