A or B?

Doesn't quite validate, by the way. Doubt I can fix it though.

The alignment of the different components are... odd. It seems very busy and disorienting for how simple it really actually is. I like the animated header, though. VERY nice touch.

Overall, it seems like it would have been really slick looking, but it looks like there's so many little things added in that it lost that with simplicity.

Yeah, I suck at CSS to the point I barely know what the hell I'm doing. All help greatly apprecitiated.

I really like where you were going in the first one. The logo is nicer too.


That navigation you have in the logo is really cool. Make it bigger though, its a little hard to read right now. That should be your main nav, instead of having the links down the side too.

I say keep working on that one and it can come out ereally cool.

I really like B. The moving top components in A seem out of place to me.

I prefer B.

I personally really like A, I like the logo and header buttons a lot more.

I seriously dislike the :
* home
* about yours truly
* curriculum vitae
* graphic design
* creative writing
* misc. design
* personal
* photo gallery
* contact

It looks too big, out of place and lacks any style. Considering your nice buttons on top, you not how to give things style... so do it!

Concerning the main content text, you really need to give it some more line spacing (leading) because right now its way too bunched up.

Finally the last think I'm not too sure about is the dark aqua blue color of the background.

Thanks for comments. Latest (and probably closest to last) version:

http://intuitive-ds.com/personal/project9c/index.htm

The only thing that's probably not going to stay's the menu, but I don't really know where to stick it yet.

I like it, I like where the navigation is at too but it could use some love

Yep, I'll change it eventually. Just need to think of something less trivial.

Also, ignore my last post - I just realized that the "final" design only works in Firefox at 768x1024. Other browsers vomit violently simply when you visit the site, and hastly die in unspeakable agonies when you try to change the resolution.

I really like the new concept. Cool idea

Yay: http://intuitive-ds.com/max/index.htm

Will still need someone's advise on the CSS part, mainly the bg later on, though.

He-hey, I figured it out.