Hallo everybody! I'm new here, so I hope you don't mind me popping up like this.

I'm a friend of Luv-bunneh and Xzero, also known as Ayumi. They've both buggered me constantly to start edit jedi knight, so I decided to perk up and get it and start editing.

I've been following their counciling on editing and their tips, trying to make my way into that hub contest they keep bugging me to enter. I hope I can get in ^^;

Anyway, I hope you like this level, dawn-to-dark.

Here's the level:









Enjoy the level. It's taken me a very long time to get this down, and I've just started the level. Special thanks to my best friends Xzero and Luv-Bunneh for all the help! I would have never been able to get this without them ^^;

Some advice.

This is a good beginning layout; however, if this is a deathmatch, you have to consider that players ought to have obstacles behind which to take cover. Think about "flow"... that is, how players will actually end up interacting in the layout you're creating.

Architecturally wonderful but work on that screwy lighting (shot 1 and 3).

um where's the textures.. and in JED hit ctrl+l

What took you so long to get started? >.>;; Architecture is fab. Especially for a first project.

Yeah, lighting definately needs to be worked on.. But I'm not one to talk. I gave up on JK editing cause I suck at lighting. :|

Archi looks nice. Definately a good start.

Slap some textures on that baby.

Yessums ^^ Texart!

It took me days ^^;

Damn, that looks nice.

pa-ritty cool!

Good stuff!

Is that MaDa's light texture I see there?

Sure looks like it.

Looks so much better when textured.

Those textures look oddly familiar...

I'm not entirely impressed with your implementation of them. That set is much more versitile, from my experience. Try using less of the generic rock textures and more of the detail ones. Plus, that one you are overusing (pilarcem16a.mat) doesn't tile nearly as well as you seem to think it does.

I really like it now that it's textured. Good job.

That reminds me of an old level known as "The Jedi Pool". It's not exactly like it, but it projects the same mood.