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My dumb song
2007-04-30, 6:13 PM #1
[mp3]http://snyder.kundor.org/mp3/king-arthur.mp3[/mp3]

:downs:
2007-04-30, 6:28 PM #2
FAKE VIOLIN BAD!

WRONG FORUM BAD!

OTHER STUFF GOOD!
Think while it's still legal.
2007-04-30, 7:24 PM #3
Not bad. After about the 1 min mark when you add in the background strings it gets a lot more depth to it, which is good. More of the ending!
"Flowers and a landscape were the only attractions here. And so, as there was no good reason for coming, nobody came."
2007-04-30, 9:07 PM #4
Originally posted by Bobbert:
Not bad. After about the 1 min mark when you add in the background strings it gets a lot more depth to it, which is good. More of the ending!


But the strings don't bang like the harpsi does :v:
2007-04-30, 10:39 PM #5
I really like what you have.

I think it could be improved by adding a section that sounds a little different from this one---this would make a good chorus, for example, but it needs differing sections to break it up.
"it is time to get a credit card to complete my financial independance" — Tibby, Aug. 2009
2007-05-01, 5:23 PM #6
Didn't really like the intro, but after about 25 seconds it got good. The last 45 seconds were really good.
Oh, and I liked the fake violin.


Keep it up. :)
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2007-05-01, 5:56 PM #7
YEAH ITS DUMB ALRIGHT

Actually, it's pretty cool.
COUCHMAN IS BACK BABY
2007-05-02, 6:33 PM #8
Too clean, IMO. Nicely arranged tho! :)
2007-05-04, 1:15 AM #9
ending's a little quirky. good, but some might say a little cluttered. theres also a sci-fi-ish sound at the 47 second mark that sounds kinda out of place.

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