saberopus
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Yayaya you know I read the Conqueror's trilogy at your recommendation sir. 'Twas good, nice to see you still into dat.
I really like the line quality on the first drawing, it's nice and smooth... what original resolution are you working at? As far as the figure goes, it's pretty good, the stance in the legs is believable and suggests a definite motion, which is noice... the shoulders are a little rigid, but that could be your intent... drawing shoulders correctly is hard... I can't really do it. On the tail, because you've made that fold line... because you have it cross completely over to the other bounding line of the tail, it makes the tail look like it's flat, and folder over once at that point... the way you've done it COULD be accurate, but only if the tail sort of comes to a point on the bottom... like an inverse teardrop shape, I suppose. But if that's the case, then the way it's drawn implies that the 'point' of the teardrop toward the tip of the tail is pointing sideways at least, if not up.