Egotistical B*tch

An introduction cluttered with a purple haze-
Not quite the royalty I expected.
High tide trailer trash puffing on the cancer sticks of class.
Devouring etiquette and regurgitating it as the lords word.

For some reason I can't help but act suspicious.
Kuala Lumpur, Africa--The Moon?
Has she really visited them all?
Of course she has. Once a fox never a fibber!

Here we go again! Another anecdote that needs an antidote.
Suddenly I see the reason for the second comings delay.
Pain and suffering has managed to sit at my table,
And wearily compliment my table cloth.

Special needs children, meet special needs adults.

Angsty

Carrots, handbags, cheese.

It's pur' good.

This line seems a bit overwrought to me, kinda doesn't flow as well... perhaps the sound of it it just in contrast w/ the sorta smooth lyrical flow the previous lines have?

" Here we go again! Another anecdote that needs an antidote."

And I think the last line is nice but it seems a little abrupt... like there was no indication it was coming, no previous reference to special needs or children v. adults, hmmm, that wasn't put too well, but i hope you get the drift... it hasn't sunk in yet whether or not i think that's a good or bad thing about it, anyway

The original two lines are from the original rendition of the poem which got deleted. Those two lines (antidote / special needs) are the ones I liked the most from the old poem, but I didn't do so well putting them in the new one. I'll try and clean it up, I just wanted to get my thoughts out before I forgot them again. Thanks for the responses so far.