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A Poem - Friends and Strangers
2007-11-30, 4:06 PM #1
Friends and Strangers

Second guessing, Constant fussing

I can't confide in you,
You leave me petrified
Without you,
My thoughts designed,
My destination defined.
Leave me

So desolated.

Isolate me,
Stagnate me,
Desolate me.

The less I disclose,
the further I go,
As we discuss,
Your power grows.
You create distrust.
Leave me

So complicated.

We once were united
Where are you now?
No longer sighted.
Your presence is lost.
You leave me too
doubt my only friend.
Join me

So isolated.

Together,
You pick me up,
then push me back,
My thoughts collide,
are they still on my side?
Join me

So stagnated.

Apprehensive,
indecisive,
is this how
I must live?

Self contained, too restrained.




Some of the wording and structure could probably be better, but that's not really what I was focusing on (I might tidy it up a bit at some point though).
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