"Percisely."

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I edited it for clarity, better language, and a few other things. I'll probably take another pass at it tomorrow.

With automatic spell check these days, you must have been extremely lazy not to correct "percisely".

It looked right.

Kirby, this isn't a shot at you or anything, I just thought I'd let you know -- I recall that when I glanced at your website a little while ago there were a number of similar "small" spelling mistakes (on your About page, I think).

Edit: here it is.

[quote=About page]As a diastrophically displaciad fetus, BSG was already writing his great American novel. Then he grew up to be an ENTP Atheist with a spite for lying and a tendancy to spite himself. He learned how to write from a Mr. Benson somewhere in there, and then left heaven for hell and lived with his parents until 20 writing poetry and becoming a student every day and being greatful for the oppertunity too.[/quote]

Not a deal at all, I appreciate the corrections. Tumblr windows don't have spellcheck in ff2, for some reason.

Any opinions on the story?