It's great, but the font for the quote and authors(?) is too small, the letters are too thin. Either make it larger, increase the horizontal skew or pick another one. I assume this is going to be printed, in which case it'll be even harder to read.

Not gonna be printed, and this is a small version.

i did it anyway tho

Horizontal skew? I believe it's called tracking, Emon

Aside from the problems already mentioned, the red box behind "Hell" still looks too much like a box. I think the edges should be destroyed a little more to match the grimy nature of the rest of the image. Particularly the corners, but each side should be roughed up more too.

I couldn't remember what it was called. My description is geometrically accurate.

Also agree about breaking up the edges on the box.

who gives a **** about typography it hardly even matters

You're right. There's hardly any difference in mood or meaning conveyed between the original and this version:

it was supposed to be a joke. I thought you of all people would get it

And, lol, for that matter: mb, who gave me a warning for that post

Oh.

The more I rough up the corners the more it looks like a ****ty bevel effect. :/

When things are destroyed and crumbling away, pieces don't just disappear; they relocate. Try putting some flecks outside of the bounding box. This will break up the straight line that could be used for a sobriety field test you have going there.

skew (noun): a deviation from a straight line : slant