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Past the Giant Squid
2010-05-17, 12:38 PM #1
Beyond the galaxies
That the human eye can fathom
Through the strongest telescopes on Earth

Beyond the Solar System
Beyond the Milky Way

And past the Giant Squid

Reflect the eyes
Of a catharsis
That will one day bloom
Into a rose
On thorny vines
幻術
2010-05-17, 12:39 PM #2
[http://scienceblogs.com/startswithabang/upload/2010/01/i_am_not_afraid_to_believe_in/bigbang.jpg]

(stolen via Google Image Search from here: http://scienceblogs.com/startswithabang/upload/2010/01/i_am_not_afraid_to_believe_in/bigbang.jpg)
幻術
2010-05-18, 7:57 AM #3
I was never any good at this poetry thing. :P
幻術
2010-05-20, 1:34 AM #4
I really like it. It flows perfectly to me, and is beautifully written. I will say I didn't get it before your second post, but that doesn't detract from the poem as rather it tells of my own limits.

I'm still not sure what you refer to by the Giant Squid? I keep thinking God.
Looks like we're not going down after all, so nevermind.
2010-05-20, 2:28 AM #5
God(s), Dark Matter, etc. Basically, "The Unknown."

Thanks a bunch for reading, glad you liked it. :)
幻術

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