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sonnet: aquatic angel (and a little psp)
2012-01-22, 2:44 PM #1


Aquatic Angel

I was friends with seas and oceans of the world
My record stated a thousand dives
In cold, in heat, when waters whirled
I dived and lived a thousand lives

But on my thousandth-and-first
When diving in the Bismarck Sea
My oxygen tank burst
And I was suddenly set free

I drowned, there is no other explanation
And when I did, I met an underwater beauty
My mouth open in sheer fascination
My heart jerked back to its duty

Alive, surprised, I vowed to never dive again
Now all I do is dream of her and of the secrets depths contain
幻術
2012-01-26, 7:01 AM #2
Nice work, Koobs :)
2012-01-26, 1:50 PM #3
Hey, thanks! Thanks for the comment as well, awesome! :D
幻術

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