It was, more or less, about what follows. I've always felt like I could make something of my writing some day, but this is the first time I actually wrote a short story. I'm posting what I have now (A first draft). The dialogue is extremely disjointed for the most part because I have trouble with it, however you should be able to determine the speaker from context. I'll probably fix that later, I would appreciate ideas on how to approach dialogue.

Adagio for strings on repeat is what drove me through this.

http://pastebin.com/kkwxRtg7