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a poem for a girl i care about
2013-09-01, 12:58 PM #1
fkitnvm.
幻術
2013-09-01, 10:22 PM #2
Originally posted by Koobie:
fkitnvm.


Great poem. I hope she is as impressed by it as I am.
>>untie shoes
2013-09-01, 10:36 PM #3
Quote:

A symphony of light
The music rings out true
Lights on
Flee, or stay and fight
About what we do

With music that we play
While we are still alive
Jump inside the fray
You'll win if you will strive

Around us, stupidity steeps low
It's not about the tune
We whistle while we dance
It is about the flow

The rhythm of written word
Read loudly and clear
The one and only Lord
Whom I refuse to fear

Let words and music flow
No pace, all entropy and chaos
Remember Algernon,
The dead labarotary mouse

Life, like a breath
Expressed in music
Without love, it has no depth
Without hate, it still is music

Welcome physical attraction
Set to 80's Rock & Roll
Meet bodies, interwined in action
Sex magic fireball

There's more to us than lust
There's friendship and respect
We do the things we must
Fine ships are never wrecked

The wood gave in to wind
The storm bent down the masts
The sailors only grinned
They'll live until life lasts


i'm just gonna leave this here
eat right, exercise, die anyway
2013-09-01, 10:49 PM #4
THE TRUTH SHALL SET YOU FREE!
>>untie shoes
2013-09-02, 3:54 AM #5
:)

also, i owe her money, lulz.
wonderful girl. :D
幻術
2013-09-02, 6:23 AM #6
made some changes to above (eg., 3rd line in 1st stanza is absolutely redudnant). anyway, here's another one so that we don't get all teary eyed...

transmission starts:
to n0wherenets from internets.
somebody farts,
it's life, it happens: farts.

this is what this poem is about
about the times
when they're so loud,
farts.

they happen to us all
when our stomachs are upset;
farts bounce against the wall,
put neighbors to unrest.

farts are the ultimate test
of spousal devotion,
whose farts are quieter than the rest?
whose put all hell in motion?
幻術

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