I started work on this alst night, so its pretty preliminary. I still need different textures, and to fix the lighting a bit, as well as a lot more things. Comments,suggestions, flames?

[Its JK, and its a subway]

With the lights out, it's less dangerous, here we are now, entertain us...[my fav. song]

I like the textures a lot, you shouldn't change them. The lighting does need a lot of work though.

Maybe post an ingame screen with a bit more light. Looks good so far, though.

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I see dflt! No seriously, I do. But it looks pretty good right now, but work on the lighting some and it'll be great.

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Good choice.

Looks good so far.

you edited out whatever it was in that last taskbaritem, but you didn't edit out your horrid taste in music?

Most textures are pretty nice, you just need to work on the alignment a bit. the lighting will be easily fixed by just cleaving the hallway at the place where the sideways attach.

Place some lamps too, so the light comes from something.

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Honestly, it reminds me of Doom 2.

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The last one is his AIM chat.

As for music, to every person his own. Your opinion.

what is it?

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Its Doom, isn't it Matrix??

Actually I think he said it was a subway.

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That's not Linkin Park he's listening to, it's Linkin Parikanoista, a russian easy-listening band.

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Wookie Camp
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Thriving Desert

whats up with the thread title?

anyway you should of posted more screenshots. one isnt enough. all i practically see is a hallway with a few rooms off to the side. lighting needs work. other than that it look alirght from wha i can see.

matrixhacker, I *do* still have that subway for you and the team. As well as the test area. But fix the texture errors on the stairs, recalculate the lighting, and fix that texture on the left.

Sadly, it looks like you spent more time blurring your Instant Message than you did making that hallway.

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No ****. He was joking, that's why he used , .

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[This message has been edited by Emon (edited July 09, 2003).]

Unlike you Emon, I must not have the amazing talent to decypher sarcasm in TEXT format. I can find about 3 different ways to interpret that sentance. I picked one.

Lay off my back.

[bizanned]

[This message has been edited by Sine Nomen (edited July 09, 2003).]

hahaha nice.

Guys,get back on topic. Plus,no flaming.

This thread is in jeopardy of being closed because of what only one person said. Sad.

As for the level, there's not much to say that others haven't already said. The lighting needs some work (I suggest using several dynamic lights in different locations that are tuned down low, maybe range = .5 and intensity = 2 and stick it closely in a corner and just keep doing that). Textures seem out of place, and maybe you should add some posters in there somewhere, I know that subways have lots of posters and printings on their walls.

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Battle Ground Oasis The Forgotten Tomb
Office Building Arena
SpacePort Oasis
Wookie Camp
Fade to Black
Thriving Desert

Edit: This post was a reply to the one who is now bizanned and no longer needed.

[This message has been edited by Emon (edited July 09, 2003).]

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The level is nice, matrixhacker. I just think the lighting needs a lot of work. It looks very odd as of now. That aside...



Emon frequently provides helpful constructive criticism to level and mod authors of every degree of skill. The only people who don't like him are the *******s who think any level moderately good or better should get nothing more than "OMG OMG TEH 1337 LOLOL U SHOULD WORK AT A GAEM MAKING PLACE." If you are a typical example of the people on your NJO forums, I can see why he came here.

[This message has been edited by Sine Nomen (edited July 09, 2003).]

Now that this has been mostly resolved...

NJO died last year because of petty internal political schemes, to put it politely.

Emon, if memory serves, was here LONG before he visited NJOs forums. I'm not positive on this, and I'm not going to bother checking his registration date.

As for your comment about those that don't like him and why... your opinion.

I'm leaving this thread now, probably shouldn't have even bothered with this reply.

NJO/JO died several times and was revived, all due to petty political schemes and people who thought ruling a clan was their destiny in life or some BS.

Anyways, no need to keep that crap in this thread, that was years ago.

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Sorry to disturb your trip down memory lane, but can we get back on topic?

Someone should make a map and call it "Memory Lane"...

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"I wonder... what might happen if I were to open this door. This simple, wood paneled door. What would happen? Would I find a closet? A bathroom? A kitchenette? Or would I be treated to a nightmarish vision of a universe beyond ours, a universe of meaningless powers and frightful entities with a need to express their sadistic urges? Or a bedroom?"
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You guys sure know how to show a complete lack of respect for the author of a thread.

Anyways, so far the level looks good. But we could use an in-game screenshot to give better comments on it.

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[This message has been edited by Morfildor (edited July 13, 2003).]

I like the textures.

Stitching is your friend.

Perhapos a little bit more roundness in a few places would help to smooth it out, and as was mentioned. Lighting could use help. Forgive me if you posted updates, I didn't read through more ten of teh posts

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