Awesome. But I had better be in the next strip. With beer. And wit.

I agree with malus, the text in the first panel got stretched

Also, draw at least two different open mouths...looks dull otherwise.

oy! something popped into mind: second panel... before today, i couldn't figure out what the little dust trail was... i thought it was like, bumpy pavement or osmething.... try having it fade out, perhaps? as it is, it isn't entirely clear that it's a pic of you zooming along at high speed...

but that's really not too important. people will be less impressed with a stunning first comic than they will with seeing your drawing proficiency increase week after week or month after month.

keep it up, i look forward to reading more!

UPDATE BELOW

OK, this is a test in my ability to copy what people look like into art:

http://www.zentatsu.com/courtneydone.jpg

I spent at least 4 hours on this piece. My girlfriend on the webcam fashioning, as well as giving criticism and advice. I'll let her tell you what she thinks.

This is one of the captures I took:
http://www.zentatsu.com/realcourtneytall.jpg

You can see the creative process here:
http://www.zentatsu.com/courtneybod.jpg
http://www.zentatsu.com/courtneybod2.jpg
http://www.zentatsu.com/courtneyhotbod.jpg
http://www.zentatsu.com/courtneyhothair.jpg
http://www.zentatsu.com/courtneytall.jpg

These of course weren't ALL of the versions, as I replaced the same version with an updated version of itself, but it's a good general flow of change. I think it's VERY interesting to see where I came from.

Comments? Suggestions?

others say to be realistic, it needs to be wider.

I say, it's a comic and if we're going for realism he's got a lot've work to do.

The hair isn't like mine, as my hair is pretty odd, but it works for the picture. Furthermore, my jaw and face is overall narrower. But I think it's amazingly done and quite excellent.

I played with her jaw some and got this:



Pictures of her real face:
http://www.zentatsu.com/sosexy.jpg
http://www.zentatsu.com/amazing.jpg
http://www.zentatsu.com/cutehat.jpg
http://www.zentatsu.com/goodcourtneypic.jpg
http://www.zentatsu.com/courtneyface.jpg

Better? Worse?

silly crippled short guy... Hot girlfriends... Huzzah! It's looking good kirbs... Sorry I wasn't answering yesterday... I wasn't home. And I'm sure you just wanted me to build a website or something anyways. :p

I wanted a banner ad from OSC to put on my site, ****face! :-P

Well, I can't wait for another comic for me to follow.

if finding a cartoon of courtney arousing is wrong... i dont wanna be right

if(getThingFlags(source) & 0x8){
  do her}
elseif(getThingFlags(source) & 0x4){
  do other babe}
else{
  do a dude}