The eyes are too big, and her arms look wispy small.

Other than that, that's awesome. I really thought the first pic was just a remake of the JO Jan model.

Her boobs like sorta saggy...

Otherwise: AMAZING!

asian women dont age well.

I should know.

if(getThingFlags(source) & 0x8){
  do her}
elseif(getThingFlags(source) & 0x4){
  do other babe}
else{
  do a dude}

Wow rutherven now i know why they say what they say!

And didn't someone just say that it was impossible to have high poly boobs in jk?

All the aforementioned things (including the eyes, arms, and saggy boobies) plus her nose seems kind of .... odd, but excluding those problems, I think the model is quite excellent. I especially like the clothing textures and legs ... yes, that's right, the legs... >_>

As far as digital boobies go, it's not about how many polies there are, it's about where they're distributed .... <_<

wow. ignoring all the boobbbbiee comments hahaa AMAZING WORK

Great work.

It makes me wanna have sex with Jan... <_< .... >_> cool model.

Imo her breasts are a tad too low on the torso, just a tad, and something about her face just doesn't do me. Can't quite put my finger down on it though... might be the nose and eyes.

I think her face is to long and thin.

Oh and yeh, something with boobs isn't right.

Looks fantastic overall, but her breasts are too low and her nose is a little... weird.

great work shred, love it. Can't really bring any new complaints to the table though.

You seem to have trouble with the eyes on the first few passes with all your models, once their fixed up I think the model will be awesome.

Give the arms a little more substance and I'll do her anyday. Don't have beef with anything else, cuz it's just that awesome.

"...right where her legs meet her back, where the lord split her..."
0_o


But really, that does look fantastic.

In the first picture, the upper part of her arms (above the elbow) looks too long, making her arms too long overall (I think), or is it me?

I think it's because they are too thin. The length could be ok, it's hard to tell...

The actress, however, has VERY thin arms. The thin arms creates an effect making the arms looks disproportional. To add to this, the gloves sort of mess up your perspective. Rest assured, her arms are the "legal" length :-P

I can't make an informed decision without seeing her behind.

If you insist



Theres some shots of the player model.

She looks older than the cutscene actress, with a broader frame and facial features. Her breasts are on the saggy side and a little too large compared to the petite Jan actress who is just gorgeous.

But all that isn't really of much importance. Great model, great work.

What's with the dark eyeshadow-ish effect in the corners of her eyes? It looks like she's wearing more makeup than a Hong Kong hooker.

Is everyone too "omg shred ur a JK god" to point out the obvious flaws in this model? I respect Shred's work as much as the next guy, but ignoring the flaws and blindly complementing him does not help him.

The nose is also a bit funky, underneath and around it, the textures that is. She looks about like what I did after a weeklong bout with hay fever this month.

Also, saggy and kind of pointy breasts. A few more polygons would fix the pointiness.

The moire patterns on the shirt are also kind of annoying. Maybe blur the texture a little bit?

Did you even read the other people's posts? Most of your stuff has already been mentioned.

Not that I've seen her behind I can safely say that I give this model two thumbs up.

I only see one post that mentions all of what I said, and apparently I missed it before.

Less JO inspiration! More JK cutscene inspiration!

Thanks pedro, you have a point, every character that I see in JKR that has also been featured in JO and JA look too alike, You should be modeling after the JK cutscenes, not the JO crap. xD

Most people mentioned the breasts, some the eyes, and some the nose. And most people didn't tell Shred he was a JK god. OMG Emon ur a JK fool.

I like it. Aside from the things already mentioned, I'd like to note that the torso (at least in shot 1) looks a little off. It could just be a trick of perspective and contrast, but it looks like it's one or two sizes too big or just sticks out too much in the front. Other than that, proportions seem proper.

But there is one other thing. She has two of those... what are those, gloves, now? Hell, was that even a glove? I've wondered for a long time now wether Jan was a one-armed bandit or if she just flew the Crow with a Nintendo PowerGlove for some damn reason.

Aaargh, so confused.

i would say toss a couple more polys in and slightly shrink the breasts (yes.. i said make them smaller) they seem disproportionate. i believe that would also take care of the arms being seeming so twiggish also.

eyes seem a little odd. and nose seems pinched, the bridge kinda dissapears.

shirt texture is slightly painfull on the eyes

other than that everything is great. i am a big fan of everything waist down. legs and everything are wonderful. also most of the face aside from what was mentioned before looks great.

hah.. i also never realized that jan was asian

I was speaking metaphorically and referring to past threads as well. Sorry if you didn't figure that out. I think you're just A fool.

Emon, seriously...

Do you even know how to freakin read?

[quote=Everyone that posted on this thread]The eyes are too big, and her arms look wispy small.

Her boobs like sorta saggy...

All the aforementioned things (including the eyes, arms, and saggy boobies) plus her nose seems kind of .... odd,

Imo her breasts are a tad too low on the torso, just a tad, and something about her face just doesn't do me. Can't quite put my finger down on it though... might be the nose and eyes.

I think her face is to long and thin.

Oh and yeh, something with boobs isn't right.

but her breasts are too low and her nose is a little... weird.

You seem to have trouble with the eyes on the first few passes with all your models, once their fixed up I think the model will be awesome.

Give the arms a little more substance and I'll do her anyday.

In the first picture, the upper part of her arms (above the elbow) looks too long, making her arms too long overall (I think), or is it me?

She looks older than the cutscene actress, with a broader frame and facial features. Her breasts are on the saggy side and a little too large compared to the petite Jan actress who is just gorgeous.[/quote]

Seems like there's plenty of criticism to me. What the heck is your problem?

The point Jepman is getting at, is that, by (basically) your own admission, you came into this thread with an assumption of what the posts were about before you actually read them. Can you not, at least once, admit that you were wrong and apologize?

Let's get back to discussing the model, shall we?

Seriously, look at the second shot. Her elbows are a little too low. Just stand up and imitate her position. I just did. There's just no way your elbows are going to be -that- low, unless you stand very very hunched. So, I say, upperarms too long.

Still awesome though, I could never do that.

maybe she's got her pants pulled up past her belly button..

:p

I thought I admitted I was wrong, but I'm sorry.

ORJ_JoS
Jan Ors

huh??? I'm not following.

I think he's commenting on the similiarity of your name with Jan Ors... I noticed it myself.

lol... It doesn't sound similar at all to me. Someone once posted it was similar to 'orange juice', now that I can understand.

ORJ is just the tag of my clan.