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Sith Hell (PLEASE dont go and screw up this story...)
2000-01-07, 10:16 PM #121
How fitting..... The perfect setup for a final battle.... the perfect timing, and now, the perfect author to finish it.

Luke and kyles sabers clashed, in one incredible battle. Luke belized this was just another ploy by Darkside.

Mara suddenly entered, from a adjoining hallway. She ignighted her saber and ran at what she thought was darkside. She ran into the area with the ysalimari, assuming the illusion would dissapear.

Kyle: "ha... ha... ha... FOOLS! I am the darkside. Your pitiful ysalimari will not save you!" with that, Kyle swung his saber, removing the ysalimari and Maras left hand, that she was holding it in. She screamed in pain, and dropped the saber. The ysalimari scurried away.

Mara thought as she saw the ysalimari leave, that not even IT was strong enough to defeat the combined dark side....

However, the ysalimari had weakened kyles darkside, temporarily. in that brief ammount of time, Kyle realized the awnser to how they could win.... He rembered what Yoda had said: '...Anger, fear, agression, the darkside are they......' Kyle new the awnser. He sensed a infinite amound of fear, anger and agression here.... He counteracted. Darkside had made the ultimate mistake. He had put the collective powers of the darkside into one individual. One individual, that was never meant to be a Sith. Kyle had been afraid, angry, and wanting to defeat the darkside. This was not the way to win. He used the remaining accecc he had to his mind and the Force to clear his mind of anger fear, and everything the darkside was. He embraced the concepts of the lightside. It was not the lightside that was needed to win, it was what it stood for...

Darkside could not take this. It had linked itself to Kyle and could therfore not leave. Now kyle was darkside with his mind. Darkside lost control.... Kyle lost control....

Luke was not sure what to do. Kyle seemed to be fighting, what Luke was not sure...

Suddenly the temple started to rumble... Pieces of the centuries old ceiling came crashing to the ground. the temple was colapsing. The darkside had lost.

Mara: "Luke.... whats... whats going on?"

Luke: "The darkside..... is dying it would seem.....

Mara: "we have to get out of here...."

Luke: "We have to take Kyle..." Luke begins dragging kyle....

Kyle (strained, weak voice) : "No... leave me..."

Mara: "we have to save you kyle...."

Kyle (strained, weak voice) : "You.... already... have. Leave.. me.. i am dying... I defeated.... it..."

Luke dosent need to hear the rest of kyle's unfinished sentince to know, what kyle said.

Luke: "C'mon... we have to get out of here.."

They both run out, luke and marastopp at the room exits, and look back at kyle....

Kyle (strained, weak voice) : "Leave... the planet is going to go supernova.... I must remain...... Goodby..."

Luke and mara look back one last time. Then run at top speed back to the ship.

*scene cuts to both in ship about to take off with planet shaking viloently...*

Mara to Luke (while both hitting buttons) : "Better hope the ships working or this is going to be a real short trip..."

*Scene cuts to outside view of ship taking off with groung colapsing underneath....*

*Scene cuts to space view of ship and colapsing planet in backround.*

Ship jumps to Lightspeed just as the planet goes supernova, creating a spepherecal blue shockwave.

*Scene cuts to a New Republic gathering to celebrate, Luke and Maras return.*

Solo to Luke: "...Theres nothing you could of done...."

Luke to Solo: "Yeah i know..."

Solo: "Hes not REALLY gone you know... As long as we rember him..."

Luke looks over at a ghostly blue glowing Kyle... (Like the final scene from ROTJ were luke sees The ghostly blue images of Obi-Wan, Yoda, and Anakin.

*Cut to credits*
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2000-01-08, 4:22 PM #122
Final note on my part: I won't argue about the ending because you did say you'd be the one ending it, but I personally think it could of ended better. It had such good psychological buildup, I think the ending should of had more of a twist. But it was a good story anyway and I hope to see it as a SP level with awsome cogging! I'll help in anyway possible
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2000-01-15, 5:42 AM #123
Good Story.

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2000-01-15, 6:06 PM #124
I agree, but one note: planets don't go supernova, stars do.. me and my astronomy class [http://forums.massassi.net/html/smile.gif]
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2000-08-17, 11:24 AM #125
Just moved it up to see if anyone new catches interest in reading it [http://forums.massassi.net/html/smile.gif] *audience boos at Geb and throws rocks at him for bringing back dead threads* Sorry, sorry...

Also, if anybody decides to try making this in a SP level, please e-mail me (gebohq@hotmail.com) so I can help as far as concept and storyline for story-to-level. Thanks [http://forums.massassi.net/html/smile.gif]

[This message has been edited by Gebohq (edited August 09, 2001).]
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2000-08-19, 3:24 AM #126
boooooooo!!

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2000-08-21, 2:22 AM #127
a good thread needs to be brought back from the dead, from time to time!

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2003-01-15, 2:43 PM #128
Heh, Back from the dead is right.

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2003-01-16, 12:43 AM #129
I just read this. It was fantastic, a real made-to-be-played story, but I do agree with Gebohq that the ending could have been a little more impactful. However, to the current version's credit, I'm sure the awesome visuals of the hypothetical level would make up for itself [http://forums.massassi.net/html/smile.gif]
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